obscura Volume one The Change Chapter 20 of 23

Chapter 20

He studied it carefully, fingers tracing invisible lines in the air as he spoke aloud to the silent room.

There are fourteen guards, he explained, but I can bypass them. Teleportation magic should get me past most. And the fog my fog its not just mist. Its the Remembrance of Forgotten.

He paused, eyes narrowing.

The fog doesnt just obscure vision. It makes people forget. They lose sight, memory... their very presence fades from minds. Thats the power my technique holds.

Merlins gaze shifted to a nearby sentinel standing stoically at attention. Are these guards powerful beings? he asked.

The guards voice was low, steady. They are, but not like the others youve faced.

Good, Merlin replied, a slight smile curling his lips. Now, wheres the entrance door?

Theres a red coat hanging by the window, the guard answered calmly. Open the window, and youll find the way in.

Merlin raised an eyebrow. And your name?

Horamashkitov, the guard said without hesitation.

Merlins curiosity piqued. What language is that?

The Great God Language, Horamashkitov answered solemnly, also known as the Legion language.

The name lingered in the air like a weighty secret, hinting at powers and histories beyond mortal reckoning. Merlin considered it carefully every piece, every word, another step closer to the mysteries he sought to unravel.

Merlin glanced down at his hands, the faint glow of the tattoos pulsing beneath his skin especially the broken crown of the fool, a symbol heavy with irony and truth.

He asked quietly, almost reluctantly, Do you have any weapons I can use?

The guard nodded and produced a sleek glove, black with faint runes etched along the fingers. This glove channels energy from your hands, releasing powerful shocks, he explained. But it consumes your energy quickly. Youll have to manage your reserves carefully.

Merlins eyes widened slightly, a flicker of surprise passing through his expression, but he said nothing. The guards offer was accepted silently.

As Merlin studied his hands again, the weight of the moment pressed on him. If things go wrong, he murmured, tell the people to evacuate. But I think everything will be fine.

He laughed softly, a bitter, self-aware sound. Im smart, but not the smartest. I am the fool, to be exact. The unaddressed. I dont want others involved. I dont want to be their hero or savior.

His voice grew quieter, almost a confession. I do this selfishly for myself, and for those I care about. Nothing more.

The commander stepped closer, his voice steady but thoughtful. People care for others, even when they dont realize it. But none of us are perfect only a god might be.

Merlin met his eyes and asked softly, But does God truly have no questions? Can a god make mistakes or accidents?

The silence that followed held the weight of ages. Even gods, it seemed, might wrestle with doubt and imperfection.

Merlin nodded firmly. I go, he said, his voice steady but resolute.

The guard raised a hand calmly. Dont worry. Ive got this, he replied, eyes narrowing with focus. Its a teleportation spell, but theres one thing I cant come with you.

Merlin met his gaze, understanding the unspoken risks. Thats a fair deal, he said quietly. Just let me get in there.

The guard nodded, stepping forward. He raised both hands, fingers weaving intricate patterns in the air. Sparks of lightning crackled at his fingertips, arcing wildly before converging into a brilliant orb of cosmic light.

The orb pulsed, sending ripples across the sky. The world darkened the stars winked out, swallowed by a creeping blackness that blanketed the heavens.

Then, with a sudden burst, the sky shattered back into light, the cosmic shimmer fading as the guard was enveloped by the teleportation portal.

Moments later, the castle stood silent and still beneath the returning stars, the air heavy with anticipation.

The portal tore open a swirling rift of lightning and cosmic shimmer, its edges pulsing with unstable energy. Merlin stepped through.

With a sound like a breath being drawn in reverse, he was gone.

In an instant, he arrived standing quietly before the red-coated window just as the guard had described. The sky above was hazy, tinged with that eerie, pale-gold glow of pre-dawn. The wind whispered faintly, as if the world was holding its breath.

He reached out.

His gloved hand touched the cold glass. It wasn't locked.

Click.

The window opened not like a modern pane, but like a hidden door from an ancient world. Slowly, with a creak that felt older than sound itself.

He stepped inside.

And then he saw it.

Books stacked, towering, leaning precariously. Some bound in leather, others wrapped in chain. Ancient scrolls rolled beside tomes that hummed softly with enchantments. Paper rustled faintly, even without wind, as if the knowledge itself was breathing.

The scent of dust, ink, and old magic filled the air.

This wasnt just a room. It was a vault of forgotten thought. A cathedral of intellect. A labyrinth of minds that once reached too far.

Merlin whispered to himself, This... this is not just his library. This is his mind.

And somewhere, hidden beyond these walls of paper and parchment was the being he came for.

People were hanging

not by chains,

but like ribbons of flesh twisted into string,

suspended in the stillness of a place untouched by mercy.

They didnt scream.

They couldn't.

Merlin stepped deeper into the room.

His voice was hollow now, quiet with dread.

His mind, he said.

This place is his mind.

Books wept ink.

Some pages turned themselves as if still being read.

The scent changedold parchment replaced by the bitter sting of blood soaked into paper.

On the walls, etched symbols spiraled and danced like they were alive.

There is no world without question, he murmured.

And the fool these people are

is more than the fool in me.

He looked up at a figure pinned to the ceiling by words

literal letters stabbed through skin like spears.

The mans face was frozen in shock, or awe, or both.

Merlin clenched his fist.

The tattoo of the Broken Crown on his forearm pulsed, glowing faintly.

I thought I was the fool.

But they were wise enough to believe.

I... I was only ever clever enough to doubt.

He walked forward, the floor creaking beneath his boots

not from age, but from the burden of memory.

In this place, the enemy wasn't strength.

It was thought sharpened into cruelty.

It was logic bent into madness.

And Merlin knew:

This wasnt just a fight.

It was a descent into the deepest chamber of intellect gone rotten

where every answer was a knife

and every question was a god.

As Zallard steps forward, the dim corridor widens into a chamber veiled in murky haze. From within the gloom, the silhouette of the throne's top comes into view jagged, obsidian, and glimmering faintly with red reflections, as if it were forged from the blood of memory itself.

There he is.

Slouched. Waiting. The Hooked King.

Crown of thorns. One eye open. One eye gone.

Zallard steadies his breath.

But just as he tries to shift, something shifts behind him.

SHINGK!

The sound slices the air

a blade, fast, precise, aimed for his stomach.

He twists on instinct.

CLANG!

Steel grazes cloth. A shallow cut.

A Knight of the Crownless Order, expressionless beneath black iron, lunges again.

Zallard responds in a blink

One swift kick to the knights stomach.

A secondsharper, deeperto the ribs.

"You weren't part of this," Zallard mutters. "Now you're in the way."

But it's not over.

He knows blades. Knows ambushes.

He reaches into his cloak, activates the fog.

Not just any fogRemembrance of Forgotten.

A vapor that bites the brain, unhooks memory, erases perception for seconds.

The knight reels, momentarily lost in his own thoughts

his frontal lobe clouded, his awareness gone fog-deep.

Zallard doesnt waste it.

He steps in and spins, driving a crushing palm strike to the knights helmet.

The force sends the figure staggering backward, blade clattering to the floor.

Zallard exhales slowly. The fog coils around him like a living cloak.

I told you, he whispers, eyes locked on the path to the throne,

Im not the fool in this story.

He steps forward, eyes narrowing.

The Hooked King still waits.

Unmoved. Watching.

The final roomcloser than ever.

Zallards hand surges forward

A direct air push, concentrated like a thunderclap.

CRACK!

The knights arm explodes into black mist, flinging fragments across the chamber.

But

It reforms.

Ink. Black and slick. The arm slithers back into shape like it was drawn in real time.

Tch Zallards eyes narrow.

No hesitationhe lunges.

Upper kick. Full force. Direct hit to the knights stomach.

Nothing.

The knight doesn't even flinch.

But then

SHINK!

Zallards own arm is sliced off, a flash of pain bursting through his body.

He roarsstaggeringblood splashing across the floor.

But his mind remains clear.

Calculating. Moving.

Eyes snap to the chandelier above.

He chants a single word

"FogManifest."

From the mist, a giant arm bursts forth, spectral and thick like smoke made solid.

It crashes down, the marble beneath shattering. It grabs for the knight, squeezing

But the knight slashes through it, blade gleaming.

Mist scatters.

Zallard grins. Good. Youre distracted.

Behind the chaos, another chandelierCRACK!

It plummets.

CHTHUNG!

The iron spire of the shattered chandelier impales the knight straight through the stomach.

The knight staggers, impaled and hissing like steam.

Zallard limps forward, eyes locked on the throne, where the Hooked King sits unmoved.

I got a deal, Zallard says, voice low but burning with intent.

I cant tell you who I am but call me the Unaddressed.

The Hooked King smiles, slow and strange.

His voice is dust and thunder:

Then speak, Unaddressed. What brings you to a house already mourning?

Zallard doesnt blink.

I ask you Why are you like this?

The Hooked King leans forward.

His eyes are hollow. Endless.

There are many reasons. But let me give you one

Even gods cannot touch the hearts of men

because they have never earned them.

Zallard responds:

But wasnt humanity the creation of the gods?

The Hooked King smiles

cold, bitter.

Yes But we made the form. Not the fire.

We gave bones, breath, blood

But never feeling.

That was stolen.

From somewhere else.

Silence.

Only the crackle of dying flames.

Only blood, ink, and fog drifting through the throne room.

The true battle of meaning

had just begun.

Marile stands in the shadows of the ruined hall, fingers twitching near the hilt of his blade, but he doesnt draw.

Not yet.

His heart beats like a warning drum, but his mindit wanders.

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